Roses are red, violets are blue,
Honey is sweet and so are you.
These were the thoughts that ran through my head,
Catching a glimpse of my dear friend.
Heart full of joy and mindful of thoughts,
She was a fairy sent by the Gods.
The twilight shone on her sparkling eyes,
Cheer of an angel to every one's surprise.
I lay beneath the twinkling sky,
To watch her pass by.
Soft as she is inside of her heart,
Worthy it is to be a small part.
She is the one I would never let go,
A true friend to whom I heartily bow.
Life is short, smartly you should lead,
A friend is one whom you always need.
Happy as I am to have found a mate,
Its a pride to have such a lucky fate.
I wish you always show me the light,
Delight it is to walk with a friend's foresight.
Love and happiness to all you may send,
Down to earth you are my dear friend.
(Dedicated to my very close friend.)
Honey is sweet and so are you.
These were the thoughts that ran through my head,
Catching a glimpse of my dear friend.
Heart full of joy and mindful of thoughts,
She was a fairy sent by the Gods.
The twilight shone on her sparkling eyes,
Cheer of an angel to every one's surprise.
I lay beneath the twinkling sky,
To watch her pass by.
Soft as she is inside of her heart,
Worthy it is to be a small part.
She is the one I would never let go,
A true friend to whom I heartily bow.
Life is short, smartly you should lead,
A friend is one whom you always need.
Happy as I am to have found a mate,
Its a pride to have such a lucky fate.
I wish you always show me the light,
Delight it is to walk with a friend's foresight.
Love and happiness to all you may send,
Down to earth you are my dear friend.
(Dedicated to my very close friend.)
10 comments:
lucky friend ... !!!
nice one dude ... let them keep coming !!
Sakkat dear..gud thoughts and nicely penned down.
Really good poem!! What talent you have dude.. Just Awesome.. I wish I could write such good poems.
Superb, excellent, fantastic, and I feel one of the best ones on ur blog which i liked:)
Whoz the lucky frnd?? :D
Nice poem da...
hi!good onw but i felt u cud have split up th whole thing into difernt stanzas..so that differnt stanzas clearly differentiate between th ediffernt moods(this is my suggetsion..pls dont mind..)i think u dint make the stanzas becuse they come irregular..like the last one wud be a 4lined and th first one wud be 3 lined..so if this is th case then its perfect..coz stanzas tend to hold u back at times...anyhow..good work..
-narendra
@Guru - Yeah oye lucky Lucky oye!! :P
@Swarna - Thanks re.
@Harsha - You can write for sure man.But do not copy mine :P
@Meeta - Good to hear this one's the best. Thanks.
@Priya - Well when time comes you will know :)
@frozenwell - Thanks for the comments. Have taken care of it now. Reason for not doing you guessed it right.
CHEERS ALL!!!
Awsome one!
Who's the gal?
Vow!!! I heartily bow.
Dats a cute one. :o)
Harryyyy..........Whos dat frnd....:)p
Superb way of expressing ...nice one!!
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